Ice Man Cometh XXI

[tripperfunster]

I think I have to inject some more angst, to move the story along. Any thoughts?

(not for this one, we're still working on <3 and smut)




Part 22

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[accioslash.livejournal.com]

Hahaha! Oh, this is adorable.

[tripperfunster.livejournal.com]

:D Thanks! I keep thinking I'm going to get tired of them, and yet. ... nope! NOT TIRED YET!
Did I tell you that I have a Snarry fic that I want to do a graphic fic for next?

I've been (not) writing the story for a couple of years, but I was having trouble with the voicing. First person? Second person? Third person? Needless to say, I can solve that problem by USING MY PENCIL! :p

[xenafox.livejournal.com]

I looooove the last line O_O There may be no peen shots but it's still really hot XD And kind of really cute.

Aww angst. MAKES SURE CHAZZ GETS HUGS.


Edit: I'm tired and slow...were you looking for angst ideas or just like looking for random thoughts on this panel...?

[tripperfunster.livejournal.com]

:D I was looking for thoughts on angst for the next panels. I mean, I'm gonna give them a happy ending (duh) but there needs to be a little 'dip' of unhappiness before then, to keep it interesting.

I have some ideas, but I'm open for others.

And yes, Chazz will get hugs. (if my 'hugs' you mean blow jobs...)

[xenafox.livejournal.com]

Hmmmm...maybe one of them saying something completely wrong. Either moving too fast or just something careless and accidentally hurtful like...Chazz wording it so it sounds like he only meant their romp as a one night stand or...something...that make sense? Haha.

Or maybe...next morning, one of them is like "oh fuck what did I do" and gets standoffish to figure it out and there's confusion?

I really need to sleep x.x

[joanwilder.livejournal.com]

Haaaa, am I dead? Coz that would be the most outstanding part of that situation. Heeee. You need some angst, huh? I think it's time for Jimmy to use the Vericoli on the dog! Doesn't get much angstier than that.

[tripperfunster.livejournal.com]

Ha! Don't fuck with the Verticoli! (as if coach would allow a dog on the Berber!) ;^D

I'm thinking of having Jimmy drop the 'L' bomb and Chazz having a bit of a freak out. Whaddaya think?

[joanwilder.livejournal.com]

Ooo,that'd be classico. Coz Jimmy's in touch with his innah man, and Chazz isn't.

[schemingreader.livejournal.com]

The lines are great, but what makes it for me are their dopey facial expressions and also the little scar on Chaz's hairy belly. So well realized! <3 <3 I didn't even SEE this movie and I love this.

[tripperfunster.livejournal.com]

Aw, thank you! That means a lot! The movie is pretty stupid, but I love it anyway. (and there are a LOT of stupid movies that I don't like at all.)

As for the scar, it's CANON. ;) They don't mention it in the film, but you get a good three minute eye-full of that hairy belly. (I think he actually gained weight for the film)

Will Ferrel has said that he got that scar when he was a baby. In a knife fight. ;)

[joanwilder.livejournal.com]

Listen, I only watched this movie because tripper went on and on and on and on about how GOOD it was. And I have to say it was hysterical, and I don't even like Will Farrell.

[tripperfunster.livejournal.com]

Sell it baby! PIIIIMP MY FANDOM!!! <3

[joanwilder.livejournal.com]

Oh Hai! You want me to pimp your fandom?? See, and all this time I've been pimping YOU. Remember you owe me 20%.

[xenafox.livejournal.com]

Oh God watch it, it is the best thing on earth. ...Well to me. *Rented it on a whim and is now surgically attached to it*

[tripperfunster.livejournal.com]

It's about time he lightened up! :D

[1scout.livejournal.com]

*snort* Stiff! heheheh.
Isn't poor Jimmy uncomfortable doing all that when he's just been beaten up, isn't he in a bit of pain?
I'm swooning over Chazz's furry chest.

[tripperfunster.livejournal.com]

Nothing kills pain like someone sucking on your meat-probe! ;)

Yeah, I'm pervin' over Chazz's chest too! Thanks!

[clayangel.livejournal.com]

*laughs* Aw, he's so cute. ^_^ And I LOVE the poses from the first and last panels—very hot.

[tripperfunster.livejournal.com]

Thank you! <3

[outofthisplace.livejournal.com]

Hahahah, I read the punchline for this page and actually out loud went "wah-wah-wah-waaaahhhh" like you do at a dorky punchline....
You definitely need a bit of angst, but not too much :)

[tripperfunster.livejournal.com]

Ahaha! The old trombone rimshot! ;)

HAVE FUN ON YOUR CRUISE!!

[eeyore9990.livejournal.com]

Wheeeeeeeeeee! I've read them ALL! I love this! Somehow I only managed to see the first one *coughnevercheckLJcough* so having like twenty of them to read/view all at once was FANTASTIC! YAY! Dude, this is adorable and awesomesauce and so Chazzerific. I adore him. And Jimmy is so spot-on perfect! Eee! I want to pinch his butt. I think I will!

[tripperfunster.livejournal.com]

THANK YOU!

yeah, I have the same prob with checking ijay! *grumbles* WHY? Why did they have to break us all up like that???

I'm so glad you enjoyed them! I've had such a fun time making them!

So, how are ya?

[eeyore9990.livejournal.com]

Hee, am stuffed full of food and watching a horror movie with creepy stalker people in it (The Strangers) and unaccountably stupid main pairing (seriously, have these people NEVER seen a horror film???? YOU DON'T OPEN THE DAMN DOOR!) Otherwise am in the process of remodeling house so have teh sore muscles.

How are you? :D

[tripperfunster.livejournal.com]

Opening the door, running in high heels. Yeah. Been there, done that.

I'm good! Nothing new or exciting to report.
I'm just faffing around on the web while hubby watches Law and Order.

[chocolate-frapp.livejournal.com]

I love this!! STILL haven't seen this movie but it is in my netflix queue now.

[tripperfunster.livejournal.com]

Yay! Hopefully you'll love it! God knows I do!

[duelpersonality.livejournal.com]

lol I love Chazz's face in the bottom left panel. "The horror! THE HORROR!!"