gift art for FlavoredGlass

[tripperfunster]

Only five months later.....

flavored_glass won my caption contest for this silly little ditty, and for her prize, she requested, Luna and a mouse. I assumed she was asking for a 'gen' pic, so I emptied my smutty mind and came up with this!

Title: Luna and Mouse
Rating:G
Chalk pastel

Comments

[tripperfunster.livejournal.com]

Thank you! There are aspects of this pic that I really like, but there are parts of her face that are driving me crazy. grrr

Oh well, thank you so much for your kind words!

[latine.livejournal.com]

*grins* Things like what [you don't like]?

[tripperfunster.livejournal.com]

Hmmm...Her cheeks are off. Too low? I"m not sure. I like her mouth, but I may have drawn it a bit small. (a common problem of mine) and her nose is totally effed up. I tried to fix it, but there's only so much you can do with chalk.

Overall, it's not a terrible drawing, but it's off enough, that it's not something I'm very proud off. Better than some, though. I'm not above just scrapping a few hours work and throwing it in the garbage. (like the one I'm working on now) :(